PITCH FEEDBACK + FEEDBACK OF MUSIC VIDEO CUT.

Our peers, teachers and focus group all liked our pitch.

They all stated how it was very innovative, and how we should be able to express ourselves through our dance moves and use of location as well as changing between the costumes.

At first, they were concerned about us meeting deadlines and our time frame. We ensured that we would make an organisation action plan and abide by it.

What everyone liked about our music video...

1. Good use of pace.
2. Good use of location.
3. Good costume changes.
4. Good camera work.
5. Good lip syncing on slow parts of the song.
6. Good performance.
7. Good variation of shots.
8. Good editing.
9. Good transition effect.
10. Good lighting suiting the mood of the song.
11. Good use of colourisation.
12. Good use of making the lyrics and visuals link.
13. Good use of camera angles.
14. Good editing whenever the beat drops in the music video.

What everyone disliked about our music video...

1. Inconsistent lip syncing for the main artist.
2. Inconsistent lip syncing for the female backup artist.
3. Some shots too long.
4. Wrong dress code for female lip syncer / (Should not have been wearing bomber jacket near the middle of the MV).
5. Clarity for some shots are questionable.
6. More close ups of the main artist (KAM) were needed, in order to promote him..

What we have done  (improved) to our music video in order to make sure that our final outcome reaches to it's maximum potential / best outcome...

1. Fixed the lip syncing for the main artist (making sure that it is in sync and in time)
2. Fixed the lip syncing for the female lip syncer (making sure that it is in sync and in time)
3. We have cut the long shots up by adding smaller shots in between (breaking the flow - adding more footage with less seconds) (good B-Roll footage)
4. We have re-filmed the parts where some of the camera footage was not clear, blurry (out of focus) or too dark.
5. We have added more shots of the graffiti location, so we are able to adhere by following and showing the pop aspect of our music video and also the rap aspect of our music video.
6. We had also added more close ups of the main artist. (KAM)

Overall, our feedback was mainly GOOD!